The overall idea is looking good. My only concern is that you might not be planning enough footage but hopefully when you move on to storyboard you can flesh this out more. Always film more that what you think you will need. Even though the pace of the song is mostly slow you might need to edit fast at times as the audience can bet easily bored but you can get around this risk of boredom by have a lot of shot variety - the idea of artistic shots is also a good one too. Can you please go back through the presentation and check your grammar - you are forgetting to use capital letters and apostrophes in particular. There are marks for 'excellent communication'. At times the text is also cut off esp on the slide about mise en scene. You have talked about the editing techniques and lighting/props you are going to use but you have not really explain why. Could you add this in
The overall idea is looking good. My only concern is that you might not be planning enough footage but hopefully when you move on to storyboard you can flesh this out more. Always film more that what you think you will need. Even though the pace of the song is mostly slow you might need to edit fast at times as the audience can bet easily bored but you can get around this risk of boredom by have a lot of shot variety - the idea of artistic shots is also a good one too.
ReplyDeleteCan you please go back through the presentation and check your grammar - you are forgetting to use capital letters and apostrophes in particular. There are marks for 'excellent communication'. At times the text is also cut off esp on the slide about mise en scene. You have talked about the editing techniques and lighting/props you are going to use but you have not really explain why. Could you add this in